The little piece in the beginning added to the humor , for me anyway.
On one hand, it represents what the whole cartoon represents, that people get offended SO easily that even a cleverly written and animated cartoon such as this could make them upset. As if the lead singer to nickleback, a screw or a giant dick (such as myself) could be watching and get upset about it.
The writing was very clever and I have to say I love the simple character design here. Very nicely done. Easily my pick for best new thing of the month on NG.