I think some of us just got a little miffed when someone made fun of the "ice bucket challenge".
I don't think you meant to actually make fun of those who want to raise awareness for ALS, did you Helloutcry? I got it, though. Sometimes, social media makes us miss the point of why we do these things, to raise awareness. Pay attention to the last line "What's an ALS?"
Anyway, pretty decent writing. My only criticism is the two characters sound exactly the same. Now, voice acting isn't easy, at all and I'm not saying the voice acting was bad, in any way, it's just that we could have used, I don't know, a different sounding person for the guy on the left. Maybe someone sounding dumber or something. I think Mr.Sran should have just voiced the guy on the left and someone else could have done the guy for the voice on the right.
Anyway, very nice, fellas. I liked it.
Keep up the good work.